The food that I will be describing is Ozoni (Zoni) Soup. A special memory that I have with this food is, when one news year day my grandmother was cooking the soup and realized that she had not bought enough ingredients to feed five. She bought enough ingredients to feed three. So what grandmother decided to do is make one big bowl of soup that everybody ate out of. We sat at the dinning table passing the big bowl of soup around. Some details that I will use in my essay to bring the food "to life" is the moist and tender chicken, soft glowing chewy mochi, and the thin crunchy julienne carrots. The person that I will be interviewing is my grandmother.
This seems like such a nice family thing:) the soup sounds tasty lol
ReplyDeleteI really like how you describe the ingredients in the soup and how they taste. I also like your story and how you all ate out of one bowl since you didn't have enough ingredients. One improvement would be to describe the soup more with your other sense like smell. Another improvement I suggest is to include they way your grandmother made the soup. Overall, you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteI like how you described the ingredients with words that made you be able to visually see the food. I also liked how your memory described and detailed. But can you explain how your grandma makes the soup.
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