When I woke up, I instantly smelled the Katsuobushi being boiled. I
popped out of bed like a firecracker raced down the hallway to the kitchen. I knew my news year’s day has just
begun. I saw my grandmother straining the Kastuobushi in the sliver shining
sink. The smoke started to rise from the sink making light puffy clouds. I
stared and my grandmother with big bug eyes watching her every move like a hawk.
She took a green bowl and started to throw in the dried shiitake mushrooms. I
hovered over the bowl as the mushrooms soak up more and more water until it was
about the explode. I ask my grandmother “Why is ozoni soup important to our
family”? “So the next generation of our family understands Japanese traditions,”
she replied while taking out the big juicy shiitake mushrooms from the yellow
bowl. As my grandmother took the giant knife out of the drawer she started to
cut the mizuna with detail. As my grandmother continue to cut the mizuna with
precision, I started to wash the dishes before the dishes star to look like
Mount Fuji. To my left I saw the wet slimy greasy piece of pork in a bright
yellow bowl. The pork look so slimy that it could fall out any moment. I walked
over to the greasy piece of pork I wondered, “Why use pork”? My grandmother
told me “Since I from Okinawa, Okinawa’s like to use pork instead or chicken,
plus its pork is more commonly found than chicken”. Finally when the ozoni soup
was done my grandmother took a shiny sliver ladle spoon and severed us each a big
spoonful of mochi, shiitake mushrooms, pork, kamaboko and mizuna. I look at the ozoni glazing and glowing in
the sunrise I reflect about this past year and the ups and down that my family
and I went through. I asked my
grandmother “What memories do you with ozoni soup”. She told me she remembers “Sitting
down with her mother, father, three brothers, and two sisters eating ozoni soup
on news years day”. Once the sun finally peeked up the rest of my family
started to come over. My uncles and aunties finally arrived. We sat around the
clear circle dinning table enjoying the ozoni. Before I took a bit of the ozoni
I admired all the ingredients that went into making this dish, the grilled
chewy mochi, the tender moist pork, the julienne mizuna, and the juicy crispy
shiitake mushrooms. As I took my first bit I immediately wanted to take a second.
I finally understood the true meaning of ozoni soup and what it means to my
grandmother and myself. Now I can’t wait to make the ozoni soup myself.
Omg lol like erin like erin :D
ReplyDeleteGOOD START, MAKE SURE THAT YOU ACTUALLY TELL US WHAT KATSUOBUSHI IS BECAUSE NOT EVERYONE KNOWS WHAT IT IS. ALSO MAKE SURE THAT ALL YOUR TENSES ARE CORRECT. THERE ARE ALOT OF ERRORS WITH PRESENT AND PAST TENSE SO MAKE SURE TO FIX ALL OF THAT. AS(2+)
ReplyDeleteYour essay was well written and I liked how you incorporated your ingredients and the things that your grandmother had told you. Maybe you could explain what some of the Japanese ingredients were in detail since I don't know half of those ingredients lol. (even though I am Japanese myself) Your essay was nice and I'm hungry now. So I think you nailed it:P
ReplyDeleteI like how you incorporated the interview with your grandmother very smoothly into your essay. I also like all your details in describing the food with your senses. I think you could improve on explaing more on the ingredients but over all, you did a great job. (:
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